Minggu, 05 Januari 2014

Organizer for a Five – Paragraph Essay



Title : The Important of Education

Paragraph 1: Introduction
Background Information: In this Era, education is very needed to get success in future life. By having a good education, especially formal education someone will be easy to reach his/her goals. Because for now days, a chance can be measured from education level of someone. Success in education is very influenced by teacher’s method in teaching and learning process, teaching administration, and student’s self-motivation. Process in education also determine what the result will be gotten. And in the process of education it will be better when the teacher not only teach about the lesson but also about morality to the students. Because by having a good education and morality can make easy to get some jobs and another chances. Then, to get a success in education there are some important factors that have to be had by students, namely smart, responsible and not to be lazy.

Paragraph 2: First Body Paragraph (Point 1)
Topic Sentence: Smart is very needed to get success in education.
Supporting Details: Smart means that the students can master all of the lesson and can understand them well. Smart students not only have many knowledge but also they have good morality and attitude to make their life balance. Students also called smart if they can apply all of their knowledge and ability in their life to give good contribution for society. In short, smart is very influence to support the success in education of students.

Paragraph 3: Second Body Paragraph (Point 2)
Topic Sentence: One of important factor that can influence the success in education is become responsible student.
Supporting Details: Responsible student means that the students who understand about their responsibility as a student. Student must follow all of rules that had made by school and be discipline in all aspects. Student also must realize that study hardly and diligently also become students’ responsibility to get success in their education. By understanding and realizing about students’ responsibility, students will be good students and get what will be their goals. So, responsible about the task as a student can make students get success in the process of education easily.

Paragraph 4: Third Body Paragraph (Point 3)
Topic Sentence: The last aspect to get success in education is not to be lazy student.
Supporting Details: The lazier student is very impossible to get success in education. Lazy is root to all of the problems. Lazier students always don’t care about their task and they never try the new experience. To be success in education, students have to be diligent and enthusiasm students, because no one of lazier people who will get success in their life except luckily. In short, success in education can raise to student who become diligent student.

Paragraph 5: Conclusion
In conclusion, education is one of important part to make success in our life. Quality of the process in education can determine the result of the education process itself. Teacher and students have important role to raise success in education. The students who gets success in his education will easy to get his goals and job. And to get a success in education there are some important factors that have to be had by students, namely smart, responsible and not to be lazy.

3 komentar:

  1. good, but i think in your thesis statement " not to be lazy " can be changed with " be diligent" . don't forget to comment in my blog.. yaa

    BalasHapus
  2. Good job .. ! i think I agree with erna_kaif's suggestion ..

    BalasHapus
  3. yes thank you..
    I will try better for the next... :)

    BalasHapus